I made this story:
My friends, Brittany, Mark, and Gaby, decided we wanted to go to a haunted house on Halloween, but this attraction wasn’t opened to the public. The government hid this place from the eyes of the innocent, it was a secret no one had ever discovered until one day me and my friend, Gaby found it while hiking in the woods. It was a two story building flat roof top, made with a grey stone, but not bricks, almost like cement. There was a large metal door leading into the building. Above the rusted door was a series of letters that spelled out: Solomon’s Landing. There were no windows, and just one door. I tried doing some research on the building but nothing came up. Halloween was tomorrow and I wanted to explore the place, I intended to go inside. I asked a few of my friends and they agreed to go on this dangerous trip.
The next morning I took my camcorder, a notebook, a flashlight and a pencil. I was going to do some old fashioned researching. My friends and I planned to meet at the entrance to Shallow Woods around seven and I got there five minutes before seven. I waited almost 12 minutes before two of my friends came, Mark and Brittany. My other friend Gaby got there three minutes after. We entered the woods and hiked for 15 minutes until we got to the building. It looked even creepier then before, but I wasn’t stopping there. To my surprise the door was unlocked so we got in without a problem.
Inside of the building smelled like dead animals. It was dark and gloomy. Although there was a lamp in the ceiling we couldn’t find a light switch. I turned my camcorder on. In front of me was a large desk with a glass window surrounding it. Next to it was a metal door with a small glass window. I peered through the window and it was a long corridor with large windows and doors, there was a series of light bulbs hanging from the ceiling similar to a hospital. I tried to open the door but it was locked. I looked at the desk and found a small red button on a wooden panel sealed in a glass box. There was no way to get to the button, but to break the glass. We were not there to destroy anything, but we were too desperate to stop there. There was something about this building that made me want to go deeper and deeper. My best friend Mark went outside grabbed a large rock and tossed it through the window. The whole window shattered into a million pieces. Brittany reached for glass case, removed the case, and pressed the button. There was a small buzzing sound and then a click. The metal door was unlocked. I went in, and searched around. I found a light switch and turned flicked it. The lights turned on and soon the whole entire hallway was filled with a faint yellow glow. Each window I looked through had something different. They looked like torture devices. I was too shaky to even open one of the doors, everyone was. I looked at the camcorder while pointing it at one of the windows and in the camcorder I saw someone being tortured I looked up at the room with my own eyes and saw nothing but the device, I looked back down and still saw the person. I dropped the camcorder onto the hard cement floor. I asked Mark to look through it, the same as I did. He saw the same thing as I did. He gasped in shock. My heart was racing so much. I almost passed out. I was extremely shaky and couldn’t even hold the camcorder anymore. Brittany and Gaby looked on with Mark, in every single room there was something different. Another tortured soul trapped to relive the same moment over and over again. I took the camcorder back and pointed it down the corridor. There was a person walking towards us holding a machete. I looked with my own eyes and he wasn’t there. He was one of the spirits I thought to myself, he couldn’t do anything to us. I moved towards the back of the group. Mark was leading until I heard him scream. Alright, I yelled, we need to get the heck out of here. I ran back down the corridor with the two girls following. We could hear Marks scream echoing in the hallway. I turned the metal door knob but it wouldn’t budge. We were locked in! Soon the lights went out. I was panicking; sweat covered my face even though it was almost winter. I turned my camcorder on night vision mode, looked through it and saw the girl’s faces filled with fear and tears. Everything through the camcorder was a faint green, almost like I was wearing a dark pair of green shades. Everything was green, except for one thing. In the background, standing nearly twenty feet from the two frightened girl’s was a red figure walking slowly towards us. Gaby “I need you to hold the camcorder for me” I told her. She looked at the red figure. “Marcus, please, I don’t want to die here! There is something walking towards us!” Her voice was filled with fear. I smashed the window with my bare fists, reached over and tried to turn the knob. It still wouldn’t budge. I heard a shriek from behind me and felt blood being sprayed all over my back. At that